Popular Post Glorifying Descriptions

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  1. Swifthawk

    Swifthawk Athion Member Athion Member

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    Or, to put "Beautifully written." better:

    Weepeth thee, at the divine script?
    Be not ashamed for thine tears,
    for he hath writ as if the gods giveth their blood for his ink;
    their bones for his quill.
    And forsooth, do They So Mighty seem to speaketh to us through him,
    and all that is good out of heaven and earth,
    and blackened from hell and flame,
    fall frometh his ascended hand to our mortal ears,
    and maketh us weep for the joy of existence

    Such are the eternal acts of the one true HumanBeing101,
    scribe to the gods
     
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  2. Swifthawk

    Swifthawk Athion Member Athion Member

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    Sorry about that. Been playing a lot of Civ V, lately. XD

    ....Aaaaaaand triple post. Wow
     
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  3. HumanBeing101

    HumanBeing101 Athion Member Athion Member

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    Spark1098 - Athion Member

    The traveler begins the journey of a thousand miles with his first step
    Down into the polished white marble caverns
    Stone of chalk and pearl, streaked with lines of ash
    Into the depths
    Creatures of shadow and nightmarish fantasy take form
    A darkness that his eyes of amber could not gaze into
    The abyss claws out at the traveler
    A dive into the chilled water
    A delve into the past
    Beasts of the dark that represents the inner woes snap and grab
    But the traveler pushes on
    And finally, a feeble glow
    A Pandora's Box of sorts
    For the sins of this world had already been released, the traveler knew no more pain could escape the box
    But only enter the cavern
    But only inundate further into his heart

    But in his understanding of the pain and suffering
    The immorality and evil of those around him, the carelessness of clumsy creatures
    He fears that the truth would be masked by the blessing
    But he reaches anyways
    Into the jar, for hope
    And suddenly a dazzling light of topaz shines through
    And the traveler is once again outside
    Greeting the vast expanse with his own eyes
    Eyes of amber
    A quick glance at the sun, and the traveler looks away, into the frost tipped mountains
    Crags that hook like eagle talons
    Peaks that jut into the heavens like panther claws, tearing into Ouranos as Cronus once did eons ago
    But now, with a new inner sunlight that illuminates his inner cavern, the traveler presses on

    Godspeed

    Spark1098
     
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  4. ajoyboy

    ajoyboy Athion Member Athion Member

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    Ooh make me one. If you want some info I do lots of terraforming (worldpainter yep) but i build too... :P former PI buildteam
     
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  5. Reuben

    Reuben Athion Member Athion Member

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    I would be more than happy if you did my old chap!
     
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  6. dordsor21

    dordsor21 Athion Admin Athion Admin

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    Me pliz :D
    me be dordsor21, me be male, me like to build medieval/steampunk/vampiric :)
    was tier 1 on Mithrintia (still am)
     
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  7. HumanBeing101

    HumanBeing101 Athion Member Athion Member

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    Note: I put Athion Member next to all non-staff/build-team members since I don't know how ranks exactly will be converted or will transfer. I will change the description ranks from the previous Mithrintia and Pwego-Insomnia ranks to their respective Athion ranks in due time shortly after the server's release.
    For the same reason, I'm sticking a "Former" in front of your previous server rank since I don't exactly know how ranks transfer from Mithrintia and Pwego-Insomnia to Athion.
    For all build-team members, I'm putting a "Former" in front since I do not know whether or not the build teams of Pwego-Insomnia and Mithrintia are still around, or have combined into an Athion Build Team. I do not know which members are within said build teams at this point. I hope to get those questions sorted out in due time.

    Gaynor12's descriptions will be completed next, followed by the descriptions of ajoyboy, xboxelitepro, and dordsor21. I delay Owner descriptions for as long as I can (I did Mithrintia's descriptions a mere few days before the Mithrintia server was closed. That doesn't necessarily mean I shall delay them for THAT long, but I plan on saving their descriptions for special occasions.)

    I plan on revising old descriptions. I have been doing descriptions for a long time, and I feel that my past descriptions of really notable member of Mithrintia don't do the person being described justice.

    I shall complete descriptions I have failed to complete during Mithrintia's reign. Perhaps the requesters of the descriptions will never get to see their descriptions posted onto Athion since they may have already moved on in life, but it will bring me a sense of having paid past debts (even though I'm not actually indebted to anyone).

    I've posted the descriptions I've done on Athion on a placeholder post (remember those?) as an edit. The descriptions I've posted directly as posts will remain.

    So yeah, there's my update. If you want a description done for you, just reply to this thread. And please follow the format (even though almost none of you follow directions -o-)
     
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  8. HumanBeing101

    HumanBeing101 Athion Member Athion Member

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    Gaynor12 - Athion Member

    The blistering sun beats down on the rainforest

    The caws of the exotic birds, dappled with splashes of bright reds and bold yellows
    Warn of incoming storms
    Booms of thunder, the clash of titans
    Perspiration that rains down like a monsoon
    The heavy breathing of the gales that torment the jungle
    The harsh whistle of a zebra, a referee of a divine battle
    And peace is made
    Peace enough for this multifaceted deity
    Not only does this being have a body of great and imposing strength
    Of an enormous stature
    A gleaming statue of tungsten, a density of iridium, the softness of velvet
    This being also has dreams
    A vision
    Of beauty and complexity
    For the world is his block, and he shall chip away at the granite to reveal a masterpiece of glimmering diamonds
    And embedded within his beautiful vision, a heart of benevolence
    Of cooperation
    The value the beautiful connections between humans so significant to him
    And even if he looks not ideal in the eyes of others
    And even if others refer to him as a sunset of sickly lemon pallor
    Of an annoyingly stubborn ball of gas unwilling to recede under the horizon
    He shall remember that within himself is a starry night of twinkling stars
    Like holes of light in the sky, opportunities to be unlocked
    Courage that lifts him to the heavens, above the negativity of the majority
    This is...

    Gaynor12
     
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  9. MX26

    MX26 Athion Member Athion Member

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    Minecraft Username: XxMX26xX
    Server Rank: T1
    A little about yourself (including your gender): I'm 16, Male, friendly and a big derp, I like terraforming and any build style that involves cogs :3
    Anything you wish for me to add onto your description?: supposingly i'm illuminati? o_O
     
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  10. ☞ The Guy ☜

    ☞ The Guy ☜ Athion Member Athion Member

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    Minecraft Username: Jimboshep1
    Server Rank: Was Pwego Skilled
    A little about yourself (including your gender): Male, lives in the North-East of the wilds of England. By the light of the full moon I become the super-admin... erm, that's about it. I like to rock climb... wooooo Danger!
    Anything you wish for me to add onto your description?: Just how beautiful I am (seriously: I have to wear a paper bag over my face in public or risk burning the retinas of any onlookers).

    PS: to say thanks for making this glorious description for me I'd be more than happy to draw a visual glorifying image of you with my mad art skills. So just hit me up with a request and what you want its features to be...
     
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  11. HumanBeing101

    HumanBeing101 Athion Member Athion Member

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    ajoyboy - Athion Member (Former Pwego Insomnia Build Team Member)

    Dry, coarse skin, dermal cells separated by the dry cracks of a withering desert
    Unruly, disheveled, tattered threads of silver and granite that curl underneath his chin
    Eyes of icy intensity, cold, unforgiving, revealing nothing
    An unparalleled beauty within the mind of the sculptor
    The architect
    The painter
    For whilst Ouranos strings along lattices of water in beautiful puffs of pinks and gun metal

    Lavenders and caramels
    The wise man toils restlessly, whittling away at the land
    A perfect land laden with imperfections
    An innocent Earth that hides behinds its face a heart of fire and lava
    And as the Sun and the Moon relentlessly feud for dominance over the skies
    And even as the plains are scarred with a hail of bullets
    And even when the mountains, seemingly stoic, tumble like a house of cards under mankind's most ambitious mining endeavors
    The artist will continue to paint
    The artist will adapt with the changing times
    And he shall bury his own grave when he rendered blind by the darkness of the dead sun, the beauty of his perpetual creation out-shined by a planetary nebula of greens and reds, deep rolling azures and pinpricks of tangerine
    For without his grand tools
    For without the rivers and rains
    For without plant life that tethers and connects, manifests and flourished
    For without the earthquakes and volcanoes
    The man is but a memory
    Important to us now, irrelevant to the rest of the Universe
    But forever

    ajoyboy
     
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  12. Lol_u_Noob

    Lol_u_Noob Athion Member Athion Member

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    Could I have a description also I drew your charcter c:
     
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  13. HumanBeing101

    HumanBeing101 Athion Member Athion Member

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    xboxelitepro - Athion Member

    The ground is thumping
    Elephants that stampede upon the dried and withering plains
    Dust kicked up into the air
    A puff of smoke, a grand flower of orange
    A punctuated shockwave, a fire
    Grand dragonfly putter their rotating wings, and launch their payload
    Giant goliath beetles that tread across the rough terrain, devouring everything in gulps of fire and shells
    Panic, screams, for Deimos has descended upon the land
    But a curl of the facial hair
    Of dark chocolate shavings that sits proudly atop the face
    The narrowing of indifferent, aloof eyes
    One that stares through a monocle
    One that stares into the world
    The puckering of lips, the nose sampling the fine red wine
    The scene fades away, blown into the wind, the story carried away into the dissipating smoke of the pipe
    The book is closed, the fireplace settles
    And the epitome of Maciavelli's finest dreams stands and stares into the stars
    Informed and intelligent, composed and analytical
    Well rounded and imaginative, a man of finesse and talent
    The gentleman stands proudly above the ignorant to face the inevitable

    xboxelitepro
     
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  14. Get_Foxed

    Get_Foxed Athion Member Athion Member

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    Damn I love this xD Great work <3
     
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  15. HumanBeing101

    HumanBeing101 Athion Member Athion Member

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    Would you like a description then? I haven't done yours yet.
     
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  16. HumanBeing101

    HumanBeing101 Athion Member Athion Member

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    Lol_u_Noob - Athion Member

    It is fabled that unicorn's blood is mightier than giants' skin
    Ink that flows and courses through a tip, flourishes and arches that reach and curl like vines
    Meaningless symbols that hold deep meanings, words that can alter live
    Words that can inspire
    Words that can create, destroy, change everything we know
    When used correctly, the pen is in fact, mightier than the sword
    But what of the paintbrush? The colored pencil perhaps?
    The wooden barrel of wax that works its magic on paper
    A book can stretch long and far, be packed with many literary elements
    Make people understand, imagine, envision
    But no words can properly describe Da Vinci's vision of Mona Lisa's smile like his art can
    No words can give the same marvelous feel as Van Gogh's Starry Night
    The wisps of milk that curl under a dandelion crescent
    With spindly fingers of the Earth reaching towards the stars
    Words may inspire, but artwork can capture, can bring about an instantaneous reaction
    Word are delayed, words are subtle
    Words bring suspense, carry meaning
    But artwork is for those that gobble inspiration, artwork is now, artwork brings beauty
    And Athion is blessed with one that weilds the tools of physical imagery so well
    Colored pencils the multicolored hues of this knight's glorious lance as he jousts against the dullness
    Perhaps brushes are his tsunamis, with inundations of paint overwhelming the blank with vitality
    And here he is, in search for another tool to add to his collection
    To build with blocks alongside the best
    To laugh alongside the community
    To create art with and for his brethren

    Lol_u_Noob

    Note: I have prioritized Lol_u_Noob's description as a gesture of gratitude for the Minecraft avatar art he did for me. I worked hard of making my Minecraft skin, and it made my happy to see his colored pencil version of my skin. :)
     
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  17. Lol_u_Noob

    Lol_u_Noob Athion Member Athion Member

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    Thanks :D
     
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  18. Get_Foxed

    Get_Foxed Athion Member Athion Member

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    I'd love one, if you're up for it!
     
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  19. HumanBeing101

    HumanBeing101 Athion Member Athion Member

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    I have been quite busy with studies lately (physics). So I will post dordsor21's description tomorrow afternoon.

    In the meantime, anyone else that wants a description can submit a ticket/request (formatting shown in original thread post).
     
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  20. Stamog

    Stamog Athion Member Athion Member

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    Cant forget about moi
     
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