well this is the "start of my spawn for my server, WILL NOT ADVERTISE!!!. and i need someone's opinion on how it looks
You may already be planning on it, but maybe add a dome? I don't know it that's the best thing but worth a try. Also I would personally add some more detailing around the structure. And some more lighting as well, looks a bit dark...
Its good so far but add some structures at the end of the "Roads/Paths" and as @MADVIU already said you need to add lightning and a Dome sounds pretty well if you ask me. The pillars lack of sufficient detail and depth. The floor detailing is passable but try to add stairs at the quartz blocks *Outline the quartz blocks with stairs*. All in all its nice so far. I'm looking forward to see the finished build. ;D /)